Supplemental example for this article.
Harvested from daydream playbook notes, notes from a read-through, scene list analyzation, and diagnostic charts. This is an example of what an initial problem list looks like, stripped of descriptions of course.
Add scene – Missing scene description
Add scene -
Add scene –
Add scene –
Add scenes – Missing multiple scenes description
Add layer – Thread layer description
Add scenes –
Add scene –
Add layer – Description of layer
Thread – Strengthen thread note to workshop
Workshop – Idea that needs hammering
Add scenes –
Add scenes –
Add scene –
Workshop – World building layer
Close thread – Open thread description
Consider cutting – Unnecessary trails
Add element – Small fix to a scene
Add layer –
Workshop – Question
Item location – Fix and track item
Item location – Thread and track item
Major event – Needs to be addressed/highlighted
Plot hole – Description of plot hole
Item – Workshop history of an item
Workshop – Plot direction
Additional thread – Ideas
Series conflict – Relevant repercussions
Series conflict – Inconsistency
Series conflict – World building layer
Highlight Event – Description of event
Add event – Relevant information
Inconsistencies – Small holes
Create timeline
Remove – Scene
Remove – Heavy handed foreshadowing
Dropped thread – Description of thread dropped – Workshop
Inconsistency – Description of conflict of scene inconsistencies
Dropped thread – Description of dropped thread
(Additional items after diagnostic charts and scene list analyzation).
Increase Suspense – Scene element
Add scene – Needed moment
Remove Element – Unnecessary element
Expand Element – Description
Remove word – Timeline conflict
Workshop – Ideas
Consistency check – Potential story conflict
Workshop – Story consistency
Workshop – Plot element
Workshop – Plot hole
Add scene – Strengthen character arc specific moments
Workshop Theme – Missing subplot theme
Workshop Subplot – Missing subplot
Layer – Dimensions to a character
Add Element – Fix
Example of problem list with underlined items that require clear actionable solutions. Add numbers to the margin of the print out. Correspond numbers to your think-sketch notebook and brainstorm ideas.
Such as workshop items, inconsistencies, plot holes, weak subplots, underdeveloped additional scenes, and dropped threads. Time to think-sketch ideas in a notebook again. Find answers and then designate actions needed such as: fix/cut/add scenes, elements, or layers.
Add scene – Missing scene description
Add scene -
Add scene –
Add scene –
Add scenes – Missing multiple scenes description
Add layer – Thread layer description
Add scenes –
Add scene –
Add layer – Description of layer
Thread – Strengthen thread note to workshop
Workshop – Idea that needs hammering
Add scenes –
Add scenes –
Add scene –
Workshop – World building layer
Close thread – Open thread description
Consider cutting – Unnecessary trails
Add element – Small fix to a scene
Add layer –
Workshop – Question
Item location – Fix and track item
Item location – Thread and track item
Major event – Needs to be addressed/highlighted
Plot hole – Description of plot hole
Item – Workshop history of an item
Workshop – Plot direction
Additional thread – Ideas
Series conflict – Relevant repercussions
Series conflict – Inconsistency
Series conflict – World building layer
Highlight Event – Description of event
Add event – Relevant information
Inconsistencies – Small holes
Create timeline
Remove – Scene
Remove – Heavy handed foreshadowing
Dropped thread – Description of thread dropped – Workshop
Inconsistency – Description of conflict of scene inconsistencies
Dropped thread – Description of dropped thread
(Additional items after diagnostic charts and scene list analyzation).
Increase Suspense – Scene element
Add scene – Needed moment
Remove Element – Unnecessary element
Expand Element – Description
Remove word – Timeline conflict
Workshop – Ideas
Consistency check – Potential story conflict
Workshop – Story consistency
Workshop – Plot element
Workshop – Plot hole
Add scene – Strengthen character arc specific moments
Workshop Theme – Missing subplot theme
Workshop Subplot – Missing subplot
Layer – Dimensions to a character
Add Element – Fix
Example of finalized problem list.
Add scene – scene description
Add scene – write then decide (optional addition)
Add scene –
Add subplot –
Add subplot –
Add scene –
Add layer –
Add scene –
Thread scene -
Add scene –
Thread element –
Add scenes –
Add scenes –
Add scenes –
Add scene –
Close thread –
Cut –
Add element –
Add layer –
Item location –
Item thread –
Major event –
Thread element –
Item –
Add scene –
Additional thread –
Clarify element –
Highlight Event –
Add scene –
Hammer inconsistency –
Remove line -
Create timeline
Remove –
Remove –
Dropped thread –
Combine scenes –
Increase Suspense –
Add scene –
Remove Element –
Expand Element –
Remove word –
Clarify dialogue –
Consistency check –
Clarify motive –
Clarify dialogue –
Add scene –
Add element –
Add subplot –
Add Element –
Clarify thread –
Add scene –
After the problem list is finalized and printed, use color coded highlighters to mark severity. Mark from most impactful to the least important/easy to fix items. Organize list by severity to get your finalized treatment plan. Work from highest severity to least.
Example of highlight finalized problem list by severity.
fuchsia - Priority 1
yellow - priority 2
aqua - priority 3
Add scene – scene description
Add scene – write then decide (optional addition)
Add scene –
Add subplot –
Add subplot –
Add scene –
Add layer –
Add scene –
Thread scene -
Add scene –
Thread element –
Add scenes –
Add scenes –
Add scenes –
Add scene –
Close thread –
Cut –
Add element –
Add layer –
Item location –
Item thread –
Major event –
Thread element –
Item –
Add scene –
Additional thread –
Clarify element –
Highlight Event –
Add scene –
Hammer inconsistency –
Remove line -
Create timeline
Remove –
Remove –
Dropped thread –
Combine scenes –
Increase Suspense –
Add scene –
Remove Element –
Expand Element –
Remove word –
Clarify dialogue –
Consistency check –
Clarify motive –
Clarify dialogue –
Add scene –
Add element –
Add subplot –
Add Element –
Clarify thread –
Add scene –
Organize by priority level for treatment plan.