Obsidian: Scene Postflight checklist

### Is the description evocative, is it filtered through the POV character matching mood and disposition?

### Is the pacing balanced? Does it flow?

### Is the "camera" zoomed/in out in the proper places?

### Is the description detailed?

### Is the dialogue marked clearly?

### Does to dialogue have tension/conflict?

### Does to dialogue have subtext?

#### Do gestures convey mood/character/thought?

#### Minimize filtration:

#### Does the scene: 

#### Advance the character? 

#### Advance the plot?

#### Have you interrogated your character's motivation?

#### Setting detail?

#### Sensory detail?

#### What has changed?

#### Is the story told in real time?

#### Show and tell check:

#### Dominos from previous scene?:

#### Hook for next scene?

#### Is the description fluid and active?

#### Is the pacing balanced/does it flow?